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YTuesday, April 21, 2009' 1:45 PM
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Summary Exercise using ICT
Lesson 2

Instructions:
• Check your points against the marking scheme to determine your content mark.
• Write out your summary and post it on your EL Blog.
• You are advised to make use of tools like Spell and Grammar Check and Work Count.

Marking Scheme:

S/N Words from the passage Own Words
1 damaged the Louisiana’s wetlands Damaged Louisiana’s wetland
2 It is unlikely that the vegetation in the marshes may grow back. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back
3 vegetation along water sources have literally disappeared Vegetation along water sources disappeared
4 whatever remains have turned an unhealthy brown shade. Whatever remains turned brown
5 Katrina took a devastating toll on the local sea harvests Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third
6 two-thirds of Louisiana's oysters may have been destroyed
7 US had to resort to increase the oyster imports from other countries More oyster were imported
8 thousands of fisherman who depended on the oyster industry find themselves to be unemployed and unsettled. Fishermen were unemployed
9 Floodwater in the city became contaminated household chemicals petroleum Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturb underground gas and oil tank
10 disturbed underground gas and oil tanks
11 leaking sewer and gas pipes further contaminated the floodwater Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater
12 Human corpses and dead pets further raised the risk of bacterial contamination Human corposes and dead pets increase the risk of baterial contamination
13 placing dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on
14 The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan is also planning to rebuild barrier islands The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild barrier island and replant lost marsh grass
15 and replant lost marsh grass



Begin your summary as follows:

Hurricane Katrina had the most devastating impact on Louisiana where the wetland was damaged. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back. Vegetation along water sources disappeared and whatever remains turned brown. Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third. Therefore more oyster were imported. Fishermen were unemployed. Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturbs underground gas and oil tank. Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater. Human corpuses and dead pets increase the risk of bacterial contamination. Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on. The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild Barrier Island and replant lost marsh grass.

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Y' 1:45 PM
}just abit of imagination*

Summary Exercise using ICT
Lesson 2

Instructions:
• Check your points against the marking scheme to determine your content mark.
• Write out your summary and post it on your EL Blog.
• You are advised to make use of tools like Spell and Grammar Check and Work Count.

Marking Scheme:

S/N Words from the passage Own Words
1 damaged the Louisiana’s wetlands Damaged Louisiana’s wetland
2 It is unlikely that the vegetation in the marshes may grow back. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back
3 vegetation along water sources have literally disappeared Vegetation along water sources disappeared
4 whatever remains have turned an unhealthy brown shade. Whatever remains turned brown
5 Katrina took a devastating toll on the local sea harvests Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third
6 two-thirds of Louisiana's oysters may have been destroyed
7 US had to resort to increase the oyster imports from other countries More oyster were imported
8 thousands of fisherman who depended on the oyster industry find themselves to be unemployed and unsettled. Fishermen were unemployed
9 Floodwater in the city became contaminated household chemicals petroleum Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturb underground gas and oil tank
10 disturbed underground gas and oil tanks
11 leaking sewer and gas pipes further contaminated the floodwater Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater
12 Human corpses and dead pets further raised the risk of bacterial contamination Human corposes and dead pets increase the risk of baterial contamination
13 placing dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on
14 The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan is also planning to rebuild barrier islands The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild barrier island and replant lost marsh grass
15 and replant lost marsh grass



Begin your summary as follows:

Hurricane Katrina had the most devastating impact on Louisiana where the wetland was damaged. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back. Vegetation along water sources disappeared and whatever remains turned brown. Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third. Therefore more oyster were imported. Fishermen were unemployed. Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturbs underground gas and oil tank. Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater. Human corpuses and dead pets increase the risk of bacterial contamination. Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on. The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild Barrier Island and replant lost marsh grass.

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Y' 1:45 PM
}just abit of imagination*

Summary Exercise using ICT
Lesson 2

Instructions:
• Check your points against the marking scheme to determine your content mark.
• Write out your summary and post it on your EL Blog.
• You are advised to make use of tools like Spell and Grammar Check and Work Count.

Marking Scheme:

S/N Words from the passage Own Words
1 damaged the Louisiana’s wetlands Damaged Louisiana’s wetland
2 It is unlikely that the vegetation in the marshes may grow back. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back
3 vegetation along water sources have literally disappeared Vegetation along water sources disappeared
4 whatever remains have turned an unhealthy brown shade. Whatever remains turned brown
5 Katrina took a devastating toll on the local sea harvests Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third
6 two-thirds of Louisiana's oysters may have been destroyed
7 US had to resort to increase the oyster imports from other countries More oyster were imported
8 thousands of fisherman who depended on the oyster industry find themselves to be unemployed and unsettled. Fishermen were unemployed
9 Floodwater in the city became contaminated household chemicals petroleum Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturb underground gas and oil tank
10 disturbed underground gas and oil tanks
11 leaking sewer and gas pipes further contaminated the floodwater Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater
12 Human corpses and dead pets further raised the risk of bacterial contamination Human corposes and dead pets increase the risk of baterial contamination
13 placing dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on
14 The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan is also planning to rebuild barrier islands The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild barrier island and replant lost marsh grass
15 and replant lost marsh grass



Begin your summary as follows:

Hurricane Katrina had the most devastating impact on Louisiana where the wetland was damaged. Vegetation in marshes may not grow back. Vegetation along water sources disappeared and whatever remains turned brown. Katrina decreased oysters harvest by two-third. Therefore more oyster were imported. Fishermen were unemployed. Floodwater in the city became contaminated and disturbs underground gas and oil tank. Sewer and gas pipes contamination the floodwater. Human corpuses and dead pets increase the risk of bacterial contamination. Place dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on. The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan planned to rebuild Barrier Island and replant lost marsh grass.

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YMonday, April 20, 2009' 3:27 PM
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Summary Exercise using ICT
Lesson 1
Instructions:
• Read the passage and summary question.
• Identify at least 18 main points in the summary.
• Apply the 3R Approach to Summary

Passage B

Hurricane Katrina, which struck the U.S. Gulf Coast in August 2005, may rank among the costliest natural disasters in lost human lives and destroyed property in U.S. history. The hurricane which affected the south-western states had the worst impact on Louisiana, particularly, New Orleans.
Aerial surveys show that Louisiana's barrier islands have sustained especially heavy losses from Katrina's scouring winds and waves. Some island chains, like the delicate, crescent-shaped Chandeleur Islands off the southeastern coast, scarcely exist today. In addition to their vital roles in the Gulf ecosystem, the barrier islands and wetlands also play a crucial part in protecting coastal communities from future hurricanes. The damage from Katrina may have been worse if those islands weren't there. Now with many of the islands reduced to sandbars and with acres of marshes washed out, those natural defenses are gone.
Katrina also damaged the Louisiana’s wetlands, a huge swath of marshes that makes up 40 percent of the wetlands in the Louisiana supports both freshwater and saltwater marshes which have been completely blown out by Hurricane Katrina. It is unlikely that the vegetation may grow back. Besides, vegetation along water sources have literally disappeared and whatever remains have turned an unhealthy brown shade.
Fishermen and state agencies are reporting that Katrina took a devastating toll on the local sea harvests, including shrimp, crab, and especially oysters. Louisiana officials estimate that two-thirds of Louisiana's oysters may have been destroyed. Louisiana is the number one oyster producer in the nation. They contribute over 40 percent of the U.S. supply of oysters. As a result of the catastrophe, the US had to resort to increase the oyster imports from other countries. Thousands of jobs in the region depend on the oyster industry and as a result of the disaster, thousands of fisherman find themselves to be unemployed and unsettled.
Floodwater in the city became contaminated as it cascaded through streets and into more than 160,000 homes and businesses. The torrent split open containers of household chemicals, overturned automobiles and cracked their gas tanks, and disturbed underground gas and oil tanks.
Adding to the toxic brew is runoff from leaking sewer and gas pipes, which sustained damage when Katrina toppled trees; roots ripped soil and pipes from below ground like giant pitchforks. Human corpses and dead pets and other animals have also not been cleared from city floodwater, further raising the risk of bacterial contamination.
After Katrina, much discussion has gone on in trying to salvage the situation. There are plans of placing dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on. The Louisiana Coastal Area Ecosystem Restoration Plan is also planning to launch projects big and small to rebuild barrier islands and replant lost marsh grass.

Adapted from National Geographic, Teri Mitchel, The destruction of the Gulf Coast, 2005



Using your own words as far as possible, summarise how Hurricane Katrina affected Louisiana and the plans which have been discussed to improve conditions in this US state.

USE THE MATERIAL IN PASSAGE B from line 6 to line 47

Your summary, which must be in continuous writing (not note form), must not be more than 150 words (not counting the words given to help you to begin).

Begin your summary as follows: [25]

Hurricane Katrina had the most devastating impact on Louisiana where Louisiana's barrier islands have sustained heavy losses. Katrina damaged the Louisiana’s wetlands therefore it is unlikely that vegetation may grow back. Besides, vegetation disappearing, whatever remains have turned an unhealthy brown shade. Louisiana officials estimate that two-thirds of Louisiana's oysters have been destroyed therefore the US had to resort to increase the oyster imports from other countries. Fishermen were unemployed and unsettled as many depend on oyster industry. The toxic brew is runoff from leaking sewer, gas pipes and roots ripped soil and pipes from below ground. Human corpses, dead pets and other animals have not been cleared from city floodwater. Therefore, it raises the risk of bacterial contamination. Plans of placing dredged material for a platform for the plants to grow on and planning to launch projects big and small to rebuild barrier islands and replant lost marsh grass were being carried out to salvage the situation.


YWednesday, April 1, 2009' 1:40 PM
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They see each other every day, tend to each other's needs and even finish each other's sentences as they meet daily. Both lives alone and are not affluent.
Maria’s parents were members of the Polish anti-Nazi underground .They sheltered Janina and her mother. Janina’s mother died of tuberculosis. The young Janina clung desperately to her new family She was baptized to become part of the family to avoid being detected and killed by the Nazis although she gave up the chance to live with an uncle in the United States during the Warsaw Uprising, the girls had to fend for themselves as Maria's father was sick and her mother were demonstrating against the Nazis. Maria was like a mother to the younger Janina as Janina lost both parents.Her only sibling survived the war but later committed suicide as both suffered from cancer. Maria is a breast cancer survivor and Janina is separated.


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